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    Lunazero

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    A Life Poem

    Post by Lunazero on Sat May 30, 2009 8:02 pm

    A non-rhyming poem I made in the 5th grade (now I'm in 8th).


    Life is a thought, deep in a person's mind.
    Life is a threat, to a jailer's personality.
    Life is everything. It doesn't matter what.
    Life is to not waste time, your time soon will end.
    Life is a chance; a chance to fulfill your dreams.
    Life is your only place to show yourself off.
    Life is your freedom; in this case, your only way out.
    Life is a kiss from a lip of your dreams.
    Life is a chance to say anything.
    Life doesn't mean anything. You can say anything to anyone.
    Life is a dream-cloud. You dream and you live it.
    Life is just life; there's no meaning to it.

    So why do you wonder about the meaning of life? You're just wasting your life's time. You're not getting a prize, really---

    The prize doesn't mean anything, and nor does life. Enjoy it.


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    Sky
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    Re: A Life Poem

    Post by Sky on Tue Jun 02, 2009 7:26 pm

    I think this poem is pretty great! Keep it up Wink


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    Re: A Life Poem

    Post by Crust on Tue Jun 02, 2009 7:40 pm

    Nice poem I really like it keep it up


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    Re: A Life Poem

    Post by Lunazero on Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:36 am

    Thanks guys! Partyyo


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    Re: A Life Poem

    Post by Sky on Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:16 pm

    How did you got inspired? Or did you only just started writing a poem with words on your head?


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    Bambiy

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    Re: A Life Poem

    Post by Bambiy on Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:25 pm

    That is deep man. Realy deep.

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